How to Write a Novel

Step Six: Generate Scenes and Goal >> Decision Cycle

Head scenes and Tail Scenes

Now we’ll get into the nitty-gritty technics of writing a plot that is compelling, logical and balanced.

We’ll do it with the cunning use of Head and Tail scenes. This method is based on Dwight Swain's 'scenes' and 'sequels'.

Roughly speaking, Head scenes are where your character is being active, doing stuff, hopefully getting into trouble, getting into people's faces, that sort of thing. But a character can't do that relentlessly throughout the whole book or both they and the reader will be exhausted, not to mention they're unlikely to develop much as characters.

So, between Head scenes you have Tail scenes, which are where your character pauses to take stock, reflect, regroup and plan their next move.

Now, although you should have an equal number of Head scenes and Tail scenes, the word count doesn't need to be split evenly between the two types of scene.

The balance decides what sort of story you have. If 80% of your prose is contained within the Head scenes, you've got a fast-paced, action type story. If it's stacked 80% in favour of Tail scenes, it will be slower paced and a more reflective, thoughtful story.

Both of these types of story are perfectly good. What’s important is that the balance of action to reflection suits the type of story you're aiming to write.

As a general rule, Head scenes should be immediate, happening right here and now, with the action described in detail. Whereas, in Tail scenes it's possible to compress time more, skipping over weeks, months or even years in a few sentences or pages.

Head Scenes Breakdown

Head scenes can be broken down into three parts:

  • Goal
  • Conflict
  • Disaster

At the beginning of a Head scene, your character should have some kind of goal, something they want to achieve. Otherwise it's possible for them to spend the whole scene mooching about, and very few people want to read about that.

So your character should go for their goal and get it, right? Wrong. Boring. Your character should go for their goal and -bam!

Conflict. Something stops them achieving their goal. Now your reader is interested. They want to know if the character is going to overcome this obstacle to achieve their goal. If you're good, you'll come up with a series of mounting obstacles. Then...

Disaster! Not only does your character not achieve their goal, but they're in a much worse situation than before they started. After all that excitement, they're spent. In fact, the disaster was so great, they may even be locked up. It's time for a Tail scene.

Tail Scenes Breakdown

Tail scenes can also be broken down into three parts:

  • Reaction
  • Dilemma
  • Decision

The first bit is their reaction to the disaster. It should be an emotional, internal reaction rather than an external active one (we'll get to that later). Are they furious? Despairing? They've been through a lot, they ought to feel something.

Once the emotions have had a chance to settle, they're going to start assessing the situation. What are they going to do next? They should have at least two options, though they may have more. At a most basic level, the two options are sit there and do nothing, or take action.

Ideally, there will be no good options. Having good options makes things too easy, and readers don't want to read about someone waltzing through the story easily - they want to see them struggle and strive, so they can root for them, and genuinely worry that they'll be thwarted.

Having weighed up all the options, the character settles on one of the options. The least bad one. Though it's risky, it's worth it, in order to stick to their principles. Now they've got a goal, and the cycle is ready to turn once more.

And repeat

By applying this pattern skilfully to all of your scenes, your story will keep gaining momentum and will feel balanced and real to the reader. You'll avoid having a character that seems to just leap to conclusions out of nowhere, or meandering scenes with no direction.

Applying the Goal to Decision Cycle and coming up with appropriate things for Goal, Conflict etc is usually tricky at first - it takes a bit of trial and error and getting used to – but once you get the hang of it – it will make your novel infinitely stronger than it would be without.

Scenes that aren’t Heads or Tails

Of course, you may really need a scene where your character sets out to do something, and achieves it, or something else which doesn't fit into the structure above. That's fine - you can insert supporting scenes - or Incidents - in where you need them. Just try to avoid having too many of them, or you may find that your story has lost the plot.

Task Six: Go through each of your scenes and define the goal to decision cycles.

Click here to go to the next step or go back to the Novel Writing Roadmap overview.

Try Novel Factory today for free: Register or Download
Already convinced? Buy Now